Sample student analytical response and its
revision.
Chielo tells the people of Umuofia that
they have to kill Ikemefuna and the clan does what they are told.
Chielo also demands to take Ezinma away without her mothers permission.
I think the clan will do anything that she says so in a way the elders
do not run the clan but Chielo does. The elders have no say over what she
commands. It is kind of odd for one person (especially) a women in that
time to have so much control over a village of approx. 100 people.
(original)
Chielo tells the people of Umuofia that
they have to kill Ikemefuna; the clan obeys her. Chielo also demands
that Ezinma go away with her. The clan will do anything that the
Priestess says; in a way, the elders do not run the clan, but Chielo does.
The elders do not question her commands. Oddly, one person--a
woman--has great control over a village of approximately 1111 people.
(revision)